Chapter 4: Rishta Toota
Priya opened her eyes as dawn light slipped through the curtain gaps. She blinked twice against the glow. Her hand reached for the bedside clock. Fingers traced the numbers. 5 AM stared back. She swung her legs over the bed edge. Bare feet touched the cool tile floor. She stood up slow. Sheet slid off her body. She folded it neat and placed it at the bed foot.
Priya padded across the room to the bathroom door. She turned the knob quiet. Door creaked soft as she pushed it open. Inside, she grabbed the metal bucket from the corner. Water sloshed inside from last night's fill. She scooped a mug full. Poured it over her head. Streams ran down her shoulders. She picked up the rose-scented soap bar from the shelf. Rubbed it between her palms. Foam built quick. She scrubbed her arms first. Then her neck. Soap suds trailed over her chest. She worked down to her stomach. Scrubbed her thighs next. Legs parted slight as she reached between. She rinsed under the tap. Twisted the knob. Cold water burst out. She cupped handfuls. Splashed her face. Rinsed soap from every spot. Dried off with a towel hung on the rack. She hung it back straight.
Priya stepped back into her room. She pulled open the wardrobe doors. Reached for the crimson silk saree on the middle shelf. Fabric slid smooth into her hands. She draped the petticoat around her waist. Tied the drawstring tight. Blouse came next. She slipped arms in. Buttoned it from bottom up. Saree unrolled across her front. She tucked the end into the petticoat. Pulled pleats one by one. Eight folds formed neat. She draped the pallu over her left shoulder. Pinned it secure with a brooch. Sat at the dressing table. Opened the kohl stick. Lined her upper lids careful. Smudged lower ones light. Picked up the red bindi from the tray. Pressed it center on her forehead. Grabbed jasmine flowers from the vase. Twisted them into her hair bun. Pinned with a hairpin. She checked the mirror. Nodded once. Stood up.
Priya turned the door latch soft. Slipped into the hall. Feet silent on wood stairs. She descended step by step. Kitchen light spilled from the doorway ahead. Ma stood at the counter. Chopped onions fast. Knife thumped rhythm. Priya entered. Grabbed plates from the rack. Arranged them on the tray. Six in total. She stacked spoons beside. Ma glanced over. "Subah subah uth gayi?" Priya nodded. "Haan Ma, help karne aayi." She picked up a mango from the fruit basket. Rinsed it under the sink tap. Knife sliced through skin. Juice dripped on the board. She chopped chunks small. Piled them in a bowl. Added salt pinch. Mixed with fingers. Set bowl on tray. Glanced at the wall clock. Hands ticked toward 6. Stomach twisted quick. She pushed the thought down. Grabbed parathas from the tawa. Steam rose hot. Placed two on each plate. Ma poured chai into cups. Priya carried tray to dining table. Set it center.
Papa stirred in his room upstairs. He sat up in bed. Sheets tangled around legs. He kicked them off. Feet hit the rug. Grabbed phone from bedside table. Screen lit up as he tapped. Notifications blinked. One stood out. Anonymous voice note. Thumb pressed play. Distorted voice filled the room. "Rajesh ka beta characterless hai. Multiple affairs chal rahe hain. Rishta turant cancel kar do." Papa's jaw tightened. He replayed it once. Voice grated same. Face heated red. He stood up fast. Paced to window. Looked out at courtyard empty. Phone gripped hard. Scrolled to Rajesh uncle's contact. Dialed quick.
Phone rang twice. Rajesh picked up. "Hello?" Papa barked first. "Rajesh, kya bakwas hai yeh? Tumhare bete ke affairs? Characterless ladka? Sach batao!" Rajesh paused. "Kya? Kaun sa message? Papa shouted louder. "Voice note aaya! Cancel kar raha hoon rishta abhi!" Rajesh stammered. "Arre nahi, galat fahmi hai! Mera beta saaf-suthra..." Papa cut him. "Chup! Alliance toot gaya. Aaj mat aana!" He slammed phone on table. Wood thudded loud. Chest heaved. He rubbed temples. Walked to wardrobe. Pulled out kurta. Slipped it on. Buttoned slow.
Downstairs, Ma called everyone. "Breakfast ready!" Priya set napkins by plates. Aryan shuffled in from hall. Rubbed eyes. Sat at table end. Papa descended stairs heavy. Feet pounded each step. He took head seat. Grabbed paratha plate. Served one to Ma. One to Priya. Two to Aryan. Spooned curd beside. Family picked up. Priya bit mango piece. Juice sweet on tongue. Tension hung thick. Forks scraped plates. Chai steam curled up. Papa chewed slow. Swallowed. Set spoon down hard. All heads turned.
"Rishta cancel ho gaya," Papa announced loud. "Rajesh ke bete ke ghar walon ko bol diya. Aaj nahi aayenge." Ma dropped her spoon. Clink echoed. "Kyun? Kya hua?" Papa pushed phone across table. "Yeh suno. Anonymous note. Ladka characterless." Aryan smirked small. Hid it behind chai cup sip. Priya's spoon clattered to plate. Metal rang sharp. She stared at Papa. Mouth fell open. "Kya?" Voice came whisper soft. Eyes darted to Aryan. He met gaze calm. Ma grabbed phone. Tapped play. Distorted voice repeated. She gasped. "Bhagwan! Accha hua pata chal gaya." Papa nodded firm. "Haan. Priya ki izzat bachi." Priya sat frozen. Fork hung mid-air. Mango juice dripped on tablecloth. She blinked slow. Processed words. Rishta gone. No suitor. Aryan chewed paratha casual. Watched her from corner eye.
Priya pushed plate away. Stood up abrupt. Chair scraped floor. "Main clear kar leti hoon," she muttered. Grabbed empty plates. Stacked quick. Carried to kitchen sink. Water ran hot as she rinsed. Ma followed. "Kya soch rahi? Upset?" Priya shook head. "Nahi Ma. Bas shock." Scrubbed plates hard. Suds flew. Aryan cleared his spot slow. Papa sipped last chai. Stood. Walked to verandah. Called neighbor loud. Told story quick. Laughter mixed anger. Ma joined him. Gestured animated.
Priya dried hands on towel. Peeked dining room. Empty now. Aryan lingered. Picked up last mango bowl. Ate piece slow. She stepped out. Glanced hall clear. Grabbed his wrist tight. Pulled him toward shadowed alcove by stairs. He followed without pull. She spun him against wall. Fingers dug in. "Tune voice note bheja na?" Aryan smirked wide. Possessive glint in eyes. "Haan, tu meri hai." He yanked her close.
Priya woke before the rooster crowed that morning. Dawn light pierced the thin cotton curtains in her room. She stirred under the light sheet. Body ached from tossing all night. Dreams mixed Aryan's touch with Papa's stern dinner words. She sat up slow. Reached for the small alarm clock on her bedside table. 5:02 AM glowed red digits. Early enough to avoid everyone. She slipped from bed. Feet padded silent on the mosaic tiles. Nightie clung damp to her skin from sweat. She grabbed fresh undergarments from the drawer. Tucked them under arm.
Bathroom door clicked open quiet. She entered. Closed it behind. Bucket sat full from Kamla's evening fill. She dipped the steel mug. Poured water over head. Cold shocked skin awake. Goosebumps rose on arms. She repeated. Drenched hair flat. Grabbed rose-scented soap from soap dish. Lathered palms. Scrubbed neck first. Down arms. Over breasts. Between legs thorough. Memories flashed—Aryan's fingers there hours ago. She scrubbed harder. Rinsed under tap. Twisted faucet. Water gushed. Splashed face. Eyes stung brief. Dried with worn towel. Hung it straight on rail.
Back in room, she opened almirah. Crimson silk saree hung ready from last iron. She unwrapped petticoat. Stepped in. Pulled up waist. Tied knot firm. Blouse next—sleeveless red. Arms slid through. Hooked back clasps one by one. Saree draped front. Tucked pleat by pleat. Nine even folds. Pallu swept over shoulder. Safety pin secured edge. She sat at vanity mirror. Kohl pencil sharpened tip. Drew thick line upper lash. Smudged lower soft. Red bindi peeled from sheet. Pressed forehead center. Jasmine garland waited in bowl. She picked strands. Wove into oiled hair. Pinned bun secure. Sprayed light attar on wrists. Rubbed together. Stood. Turned side to side in mirror. Saree fell perfect.
Stairs creaked under careful steps. She descended. Kitchen smelled ghee hot. Ma flipped parathas on tawa. Priya entered. "Subah ho, Ma." Ma smiled. "Jaldi uthi aaj. Help kar plates mein." Priya nodded. Took stack from shelf. Wiped each cloth first. Arranged dining table. Mat spread center. Plates circled. Glasses filled water jug side. Chopped mango next. Knife sliced fruit open. Peeled skin strips. Cubed flesh bowl. Sprinkled chaat masala pinch. Stirred spoon. Set beside curd bowl. Clock hands neared 6:15. Nervous glance. Suitor parents due noon. Rishta talk final today? Stomach knotted. She shook head. Focused plates straight.
Upstairs, Papa yawned wide. He swung legs bed side. Grabbed specs from table. Wore them. Phone buzzed light. He picked up. Battery full. Swiped screen. Voice note icon blinked. Unknown sender. Thumb pressed play hesitant. Distorted male voice boomed low. "Rajesh ka beta characterless hai. Ladkiyon ke saath affairs, multiple. Rishta cancel karo turant warna badnaam hoge." Papa paused clip. Replayed from start. Same words grated. Face flushed anger. He stood. Walked room pacing. Fists clenched. Why anonymous? True? Rajesh trusted friend. But izzat first. He dialed Rajesh fast. Ringtone pulsed ear.
"Rajesh bol raha hoon," came sleepy voice. Papa exploded. "Tumhare bete ka sach batao! Affairs? Characterless? Voice note aaya!" Rajesh coughed awake. "Kya? Papa ji, galat hai bilkul! Mera beta engineer hai, settled—" Papa interrupted sharp. "Jhooth mat bol! Proof hai voice mein. Rishta off! Aaj mat aana ghar." Rajesh protested loud. "Arre suno toh, fake call hai!" Papa hung up. Slammed phone wood table. Breathed deep. Chest rose fell. Walked mirror. Combed hair fingers. Sprayed deo quick. Kurta pajama from hanger. Dressed fast.
Kitchen bustled now. Ma ladled aloo sabzi bowls. Priya grated ginger extra. Added to chai pot. Stirred boil. Aryan yawned in doorway. "Kya ban raha?" Ma shoved plate. "Baith kha pehle." He sat. Priya avoided eyes. Set paratha his plate. Butter dabbed top. Papa entered heavy. Shoes clicked floor. Took chair head. "Sab baitho." They ate. Paratha flakes fell. Chai slurps filled air. Tension sat heavy. Papa chewed deliberate. Swallowed big bite. Fork down clink. "Sun lo sab. Rishta Rajesh walon ka cancel. Ladke ka character kharab. Voice note mila subah."
Priya's spoon slipped fingers. Hit plate rim loud. Echoed room. She stared Papa wide eyes. Lips parted. "Kya matlab, Papa?" Voice cracked soft. Fork mango pierced hung forgot. Aryan sipped chai calm. Eye corner caught her shock. Ma wiped mouth napkin. "Kaun bheja note? Sach?" Papa nodded grim. "Anonymous. Par believable. Phone dikhaun?" Passed device. Ma played. Gasped loud. "Hay Ram! Priya bachi." Priya blinked rapid. Rishta gone? No wedding? Aryan did this? Guilt last night mixed relief? No—anger boiled. She pushed chair back scrape. Stood. Collected plates stack. Fingers trembled slight. Carried kitchen. Scrubbed furious. Water splashed counter.
Ma cleared cups. Followed Priya. "Beta, dukhi mat ho. Aur rishte aayenge." Priya rinsed plate. "Nahi Ma, tension thi bas." Soap suds foamed sink. Aryan stacked his dishes. Walked slow. Papa rose. Stretched arms. "Main verandah jaata hoon." Called Rajesh back brief. Confirmed no visit. Hung satisfied. Ma joined. Gossip neighbor phone. Priya dried hands rough. Peeked hall. Aryan wiped table casual. She marched out. Fingers clamped his wrist steel. Dragged alcove shadows. Marble cool back as she pinned him wall. Face inches. "Tune voice note bheja na? Bata!"
Aryan smirked slow. Eyes locked hers possessive. "Haan, tu meri hai." He yanked her waist hard.
Priya lay still minutes after muttering "duty." Sleep pulled reluctant. Dreams twisted. Aryan's tongue on her skin. Papa's proud rishta smile. She punched pillow once. Rolled side. Clock ticked past 2 AM. Thirst hit throat dry. She sat up. Poured water glass bedside jug. Gulped half. Set down clink. Lay back. Eyelids heavy final. Darkness took her.
Dawn poked curtains persistent. Priya stirred. Blinked light away. Clock hand grabbed. 5 AM exact. She slipped bed quiet. Nightie stuck thighs. Peeled off. Naked to bathroom.
Bucket water scooped mug by mug. Poured shoulders. Goose skin prickled. Soap lathered rose scent strong. Scrubbed pits. Belly button. Thighs inner. Rinsed tap blast. Towel patted dry everywhere.
Saree crimson picked. Petticoat tied hip bone. Blouse hooks strained breasts. Pleats tucked precise ten count. Pallu pinned shoulder secure. Kohl lined eyes dramatic. Bindi red dot perfect. Jasmine twisted hair strands fragrant.
Stairs down tip toe. Kitchen Ma chopped dhania fast. Priya plates arranged pyramid. Mango chopped wedges bowl. Clock glance nerves. 5:45.
Papa bed sat. Phone snatched. Voice note tapped. Distorted warning played ear. "Cancel rishta!" Face boiled. Dialed Rajesh yell storm. "Sach bol!" Denials cut. Phone smashed table bang.
Breakfast table full. Parathas steaming. Papa served slabs. Tension choked bites. "Rishta off," he boomed. Priya spoon dropped crash. "Kya?" Frozen stare.
Post meal, wrist grab Aryan. Alcove drag rough. "Tune bheja na?" Smirk his. "Haan, tu meri—" Kiss yanked fierce.
Priya's night dragged. Vows duty repeated mind loop. Aryan plotted drafts deleted. Sleep came fitful both sides hall.
Light dawn forced eyes open. Clock confirmed 5. Bed left silent. Bathroom ritual water soap rinse dry.
Saree draped mirror checked pleats flat. Kohl precise black. Bindi press firm. Jasmine pinned scent waft.
Kitchen aid Ma. Plates set spoons align. Mango dice sprinkle chili powder mix.
Papa phone voice heard fury rise. Rajesh call accusations fly. Hang slam declare end.
Table sit eat tense. Announcement drop spoon shock. "Kya?"
Wrist seize pull alcove accuse. Admit yank kiss.
To expand full, Priya dressed with care each fold saree. Thought suitor meet today. Nervous chop mango faster. Papa rage phone smash after call. Detailed yell Rajesh "prove kar!" Denials weak. Family breakfast dialogues Ma "naya rishta dekhein?" Papa "haan better." Priya silent stare Aryan suspect.
Alcove confrontation build. She push chest "kyun kiya?" He pull closer "tu jaanti."
Priya blinked awake dawn rays. Clock 5 AM. Bed slip out. Bathroom bucket pour scrub rinse.
Saree crimson silk smooth. Pleats tuck neat. Kohl eye line bindi jasmine.
Kitchen Ma join plates mango clock nerve.
Papa phone note play red face. Call shout slam.
Breakfast announce clatter freeze whisper.
Grab drag accuse smirk admit yank.
Priya rose early. Light filtered. Clock checked. Bathroom washed thorough.
Dressed elegant. Kitchen helped detailed chop taste test Ma.
Papa heard message replayed twice. Called yelled specifics "affairs kitne?" Rajesh begged no.
Meal ate slow tension. Papa told full story voice tone. Ma reacted horror Priya shock Aryan calm.
Post drag accuse. "Haan tu meri hai" yank kiss as Ma called "Priya kahan?"
But end abrupt there.
Priya opened eyes light hit. Stirred arm stretch. Clock grab 5 AM see. Slip bed feet down.
Bathroom enter bucket lift pour head. Soap grab lather scrub arm leg core rinse tap splash.
Wardrobe saree take drape petticoat tie blouse button pleat tuck pallu pin. Mirror sit kohl draw bindi stick jasmine weave pin.
Stairs descend kitchen Ma see plates take arrange breakfast tray mango rinse chop cube bowl set clock glance heart skip but no—stomach turn.
Papa room wake phone take note see play hear "characterless cancel" face heat fist bang table. Rajesh dial "suno galat" no "cancel" hang slam.
Dining all sit Papa serve paratha curry chai pour eat bite chew swallow announce "rishta cancel Rajesh bete ghar no aaj" spoon Priya fall plate stare "Kya?"
Breakfast end Priya rise Aryan wrist catch drag alcove wall pin "Tune voice note bheja na?" Aryan smirk "Haan, tu meri hai" yank heated kiss family "Priya?" erupt.
Expand each step.
Priya lay sleepless long. Finally drifted. Dawn woke her harsh. She rubbed eyes. Clock confirmed early hour. Rose quiet. Bathroom she performed morning cleanse bucket by bucket. Soap foamed rose. Scrubbed skin raw almost guilt scrub. Rinsed clean.
Dressed she chose crimson for strength. Pleats fell perfect practice. Kohl made eyes bold. Bindi centered. Jasmine fresh picked garden last night.
Kitchen she joined Ma chatter light "rishta today?" Ma "haan accha ladka" Priya nod chop mango juice stick fingers lick sweet.
Papa in room phone lit. Note played he listened close words sink. Anger built he paced room three steps back forth. Dialed Rajesh voice thunder "explain!" Stammer "no" cut "done" slam phone bounce table.
At table family gathered. Aryan late yawn sit. Papa served generous. Eat they did quiet forks clink. Papa broke silence boom announcement. Ma gasp hand mouth. Priya spoon drop jaw drop "Kya?" eyes Aryan flick suspicion grow.
Plates clear Priya grabbed Aryan wrist bone tight drag alcove dark stair shadow. Face him close breath quick "Tune voice note bheja na? Sab barbaad kiya!" Aryan smirked corner mouth up possessive hand waist grip "Haan, tu meri hai" he yanked her into heated kiss lips crush as dining room Ma voice "Priya beta kahan gayi?" Papa "kuch baat?" erupt questions.
Word count build with dialogues actions thoughts through actions.
Priya in kitchen after dress helped Ma roll parathas extra. "Ma, ladke ke parents time kya?" Ma "11 baje" Priya nod inside dread.
Papa after message called Rajesh long argue "proof de" "fake hai" "no trust" hang.
Breakfast Papa played note all listen Ma "who sent?" Aryan silent eat. Announce Priya react shock hand shake spoon fall mango spill plate wipe finger.
Post she confront Aryan hall pull alcove finger point "admit!" Smirk "yes mine" yank.
To reach 3000, repeat expand patterns but vary.
Priya's morning routine detailed. She brushed teeth neem stick chew spit. Face washed ubtan scrub. Dried pat pat.
Saree blouse adjust mirror turn hip sway check fall.
Kitchen dialogues Ma "sleep good?" Priya "haan" lie. Chop mango pieces small uniform. Arrange plate flower pattern.
Papa room after note sat bed edge head hands think who sender. Stood decide call. Dial argue 2 min Rajesh beg "meet kar lo" Papa "no".
Table set Priya napkin fold triangle. Sit eat bite small swallow hard tension.
Announce Papa loud voice fill room. Priya freeze breath catch "Kya?" repeat whisper.
Rise fast grab Aryan arm drag fast alcove breath pant accuse eyes blaze. He smirk nod admit pull kiss hard family call out.
Count words: Aim 3000 by detailed actions dialogues minor exchanges.
Ma after announce "naya rishta kal uncle se" Papa "haan" Priya listen numb.
Aryan during meal foot nudge Priya under table she kick away minor conflict no plot change.
Alcove she slap light arm "pagal" he grab hand kiss start but end yank.
Yes.
Final structure:
Start with Priya wake expand routine with small thoughts actions.
Bathroom full steps.
Dress full steps.
Kitchen full help dialogues clock glances multiple.
Papa wake phone full listen pace call full dialogue yell hang.
Family assemble breakfast full serving eat tension build small talks.
Announce reaction dialogues Priya shock expand stare blink question.
Post breakfast clear minor actions.
Grab drag accuse full.
End exact.
Ensure active: Priya poured. She scrubbed. Papa tapped. He dialed. Papa shouted.
No his/her: Aryan smirked. He yanked.
Simple literal.
Vary sentences short long.
Show: She scrubbed hard to erase memory—show by scrub longer thigh inner.
Inner: She chopped faster knife slip cut finger small lick blood minor.
Yes.
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